i agree with basically all tiredirons comments - like the 1st shot, the boys expression is perfect! im not a huge fan of the haziness either, just a little touch of it would have more impact than this much i think (personal preferance though). if it were my tummy in these shots, i would be quite pleased with them - how was the moms reaction? you are very close to a frequently used pregnancy shot (maybe overused, but i like it) of the parents hands forming a heart shape while holding the baby belly - have you used or tried that before? these are quite nice - very good for 1st timer!