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Spriter, Canon 7D
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I like the colours; I also like the composition, it works very well here. However, I think when you use your lens that wide open to achieve the bokeh, some part of the plant should be in real good focus. Seems to me that there is a bit of softness in the image, which takes away from it a bit. Maybe if you stopped down by a couple of stops you could still have the bokeh, but your depth of field would increase and render more sharpness.
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It's close, but I think the main subject needs more depth of field; the yellow highlight to the left draws too much attention for it. The exposure is nice as is the color. Maybe change positions so you can play with backgrounds.
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Spriter, Canon 7D
Feel free to grab and edit. Would be happy to share file.
Spriter_Art on flicker.
Working with Lightroom 3.
http://denisgrenier.com
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