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    This is a HDR of the concession stands at our new girls softball complex here in Conway, Arkansas

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    Not bad Kevin.

    You've done a good job capturing the detail outside in this.

    It could benefit from a few things though ...

    Perspective tool to straight the walls a bit more,
    Chromatic abberations around the nearest archways and at the end of the shadow where the sun starts on the concrete fixed,
    The un-natural blue in the shadows reduced (In Photomatix drop the 'shadows saturation' slider down),
    Lens flare almost dead center of the photo needs to be fixed,

    Hope that makes sense to you

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