The last one from my evening shooting the pier.
Not sure if I should have done more to highlight the buildings at the end of the pier.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
This is a discussion on Clevedon Pier No.1 within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; The last one from my evening shooting the pier. Not sure if I should have done more to highlight the ...
The last one from my evening shooting the pier.
Not sure if I should have done more to highlight the buildings at the end of the pier.
Comments welcome.
Taffy
What a very cool pier!! Such character.
I thin kthis could benefit from some levels adjustment to both brighten the brights and darken the darks to create more colour and contrast.
The top right corner looks just a little cut off to me. I think it needed more space up there or to be cut tighter.
Possibly could do with some sharpening.
Part from that ... excellent photo.
I saw the other two first. I like the composition on this one better. The end of the pier is pretty close to one of the thirds and the eye is lead across the beach and down the pier which is cool. If you had the composition of this one with the exposure and adjustments that MA is talking about it would be a good combination.
I agree with MA here - fab shot but needs extra leveling/curves. This extra leveling will let the shot sing much louder imo.
- Please connect with me further
Photo tours of Montreal - Private photography courses
- Join the new Photography.ca Facebook page
- Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/markokulik
- Follow me on Google+ https://plus.google.com/u/0/111159185852360398018/posts
- Check out the photography podcast
"You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.
Bookmarks