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This is a discussion on Garden Flower within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Taking the advice everyone provided from my first picture (the flower one) a couple of weeks back, i think i've ...

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    Taking the advice everyone provided from my first picture (the flower one) a couple of weeks back, i think i've captured an improved one. C&C greatly appreciated!

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    Nice effort. Just a bit over-exposed on the LH side (you can see how all the detail has been lost in the petals) but you're getting there. I think the secret here would have been to shoot this one at a different time of day.

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    Agree with tirediron on the lefthand petal exposure.
    I'm also finding this shot a bit too saturated with yellow/orange.
    I DO like how the flower is separated from the rest of the blurred bkgd.

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