Was back to the chess tables at the Public Gardens and this time I remembered some chess pieces.
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Was back to the chess tables at the Public Gardens and this time I remembered some chess pieces.
I like this shot and the angle of view and composition are very good. I think it is what you were trying to achieve. I could see this as an art piece framed on a wall, except for the background. I find it way too dark. I think if the background tones were about the same as the chess board and the "black" pieces remained dark the image would have more punch. I can also see this converted to B&W to give it an overall harmony. Just my opinion (Of which almost no one agrees ) .
I do agree about the bg, it's dark and seems out of place. I'd try positioning myself on the opposite side and seeing if I could get all of the game space behind the pieces. If that doesn't work I'd see if I could get a less distracting bg or one that is more harmonious - maybe another one of the chess tables if there's one in reach.
Otherwise it's a well framed and exposed image. Sharp where it needs to be and I like the contrast between the wooden pieces and the stone board. Good texture. B&W would also be good with a different bg.
I don't mind the dark bg, I think it makes the pieces stand out. (so there you go ). However, if you did want to, you could probably lighten up the background in this picture.
I remember the first shot of this without the pieces. I like this much better. It tells a story but is simple in composition. Well done.
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Thanks, everyone. The light was a little tricky that morning as the sun was popping in and out of heavy cloud cover so while the board was in the sun the ground behind was somewhat darker. I have a few more angles from that day but this was one of my favourites.
I, too, think it is a cool shot. I wonder if you could have had more of the board in the foreground, thus cutting back on the dark background? From a perspective view this would have been very interesting to have the checkerboard 'taper' to the back and have the pieces really dominat the scene.
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Thanks, Matt. How about this one?
I think it's a step in the right direction although the OOF piece in the middleground bugs me for some reason.
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