I'm interested to know what thoughts are on this composition. Any tips on how I can improve it?? Or is it pretty on the mark??
This is a discussion on The Butterfly Whisperer within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I'm interested to know what thoughts are on this composition. Any tips on how I can improve it?? Or is ...
I'm interested to know what thoughts are on this composition. Any tips on how I can improve it?? Or is it pretty on the mark??
Last edited by Natanis; 08-24-2008 at 02:28 PM. Reason: needs image
Hi Natanis and Welcome!
This is a pic of a very cute child but it needs a bit of help.
The composition isn't the major problem in this image, but you are missing out on some key basics.
- The eyes are not sharp and the entire face is not sharp
- The eyes are completely black and they should have colour
- If the butterfly were tack sharp maybe we could overlook this, but even the butterfly is soft.
- The image is a bit too red
Hope that helps!
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