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    I'm interested to know what thoughts are on this composition. Any tips on how I can improve it?? Or is it pretty on the mark??

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    Hi Natanis and Welcome!

    This is a pic of a very cute child but it needs a bit of help.

    The composition isn't the major problem in this image, but you are missing out on some key basics.

    - The eyes are not sharp and the entire face is not sharp
    - The eyes are completely black and they should have colour
    - If the butterfly were tack sharp maybe we could overlook this, but even the butterfly is soft.
    - The image is a bit too red

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