I favour the cropped one. I would have ago at cloning out the building to see if that helps keep the shot balanced?
This is a discussion on Bonsai Master within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I favour the cropped one. I would have ago at cloning out the building to see if that helps keep ...
This was more of a play photo than a keeper, but feel free to have that go if you're feeling ambitious.
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Richards thought is along the same lines as as mine when I saw your crop. Immediately better to me eyes without the distraction but I seemed to yearn for the usual 3:2 aspect ratio. I said nothing about that because I figure I'm just biased to seeing it all the time.
The crop definitely brought the figurine into focus but I found it a little cramped. Your title makes me long for an in-focus branch just over his head, so he's sitting under the bonsai he's master of. But maybe that wasn't practical or part of your idea.
Since it was a play around photo, hope it was a good time.
I like the play here and the scale illusion. I prefer the crop or Richard's version as the building on the right seemed to mess up the scale for me.
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