Another of Clevedon Pier I am afraid.
As always comments (and critiques) welcome!
taffy
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Another of Clevedon Pier I am afraid.
As always comments (and critiques) welcome!
taffy
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May be you could lessen the contrast? or at least dodge the rocks? that may direct more attention to pier itself( may be even burn the pier a little?). regards
Anuj
PS I saw the other version of pier on your website!!!
Hi Taffy,
Another Pier - Makes me smile!
This time though, not sure. For me the 2 large foreground rocks are competing with the pier.
They are sharp so our eye goes there. From this position I might have focused deeper into the scene. But I think overall i would have moved in on this one to have the rocks command less attention.
The top part is so dreamy....I think I'd rather be lead there in a dreamier way. JMO though!
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taffy
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Very nicely done, but as Marko has already said. If you could just pick those three rocks up from the right foreground and throw them aside, (), this would make it ALL about that dreamy looking pier in the background.
Reality is a nice place to visit, but I wouldn't want to live there!
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