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    I saw this out in the shop where I work and thought it interesting enough to get a shot of it but not having my DSLR with me I just used my cell phone. Looks to me like a fallen elephant in a pen or cage of some sort.

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    Yeah after reading what you wrote it did look like elephant on the 2nd go. cud u crop out scale in lower part and door pane in upper part??? good one.
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    Thank you Anuj. I appreciate you taking a look and commenting.
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    I'm not sure what it is but the composition is quite strong as is the processing. I'd likely burn in bottom left corner to middle by about 20%.
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    Thanks Marko. It never crossed my mind about darkening that part but I completely agree. Something I'll do next time I get in the reedit mood. Appreciate your input.
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    Nice spotting and capture. Like the sharpness & the B & w
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    Thank you Runmonty. Appreciate your comments.
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    I like "found" pictures like this. There's a sense of play to them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by QuietOne View Post
    I like "found" pictures like this. There's a sense of play to them.
    yes, unplanned captures are usually good. Thank you for commenting.
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