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How does that goose fly?

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    I caught the fist time my daughter saw a Canadian Goose flying over head in the photo below. I thought a black and white version would draw the viewers attention more to her face rather than her colorful jacket and hat. I debated cropping some off of the right side but then her face seemed to far to the right. If anyone has suggestions on something that could be improved please share.


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    This works great, the balance is very nice and cropping wouldn't work too good. Also the BW works really good too.

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    The face is really what draws the eye - what an expression! Good catch, and I'll leave technical details to others.

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    I like the comp here and the moment you caught.
    In terms of additional PP - contrast seems a bit flat at the right part of the image so I might boost the contrast (just a nit) on the right side and keep the left as is.
    I also might burn the clouds and additional 5-10% and i might dodge the face 5-10%
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    What a cutie. Love her expression
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    Thanks for the comments. I already had her face dodged and the clouds burned some in Lightroom so I increased them a little. I am gussing my monitor is bighter than it should be. I have noticed when making prints that they look darker than I think they should be. My next purchase will have to be one of those calibration tools. Although I am not sure if they adjust brightness or just check the color. I could see when I added some contrast it how it improved the right side of the photo. I also added some clarity to the hat and coat which seemed to make those stand out a bit. Thank you for the suggestions Marko.

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    This is an absolutely lovely image with a great story.
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