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[GreenleafJason]

I got this while playing around with off camera flash. I liked the dramatic effect of the dark shadow to one side of the face.



Jason

[Marko]

I like the overall framing here - cool pose. Personally I find the left side dark here though it does make the image dramatic. Highlights might be clipped on right side but I'd burn them in if they are not.
Hope that may help.

[GreenleafJason]

Thank you for the comments Marko. After you pointed out the highlights I could see they were too bright. I brought the highlights down and turned up the shadows and posted the result below. I like it better this way.