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    I really like the feeling you've created here. I also like the way I'm being drawn into the picture by the lit up rails and bright headlights. I've got some doubt about if I'd cut off some of the top of the photo. That part is a big black patch which doesn't add to the picture IMHO...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Fortytwo View Post
    I really like the feeling you've created here. I also like the way I'm being drawn into the picture by the lit up rails and bright headlights. I've got some doubt about if I'd cut off some of the top of the photo. That part is a big black patch which doesn't add to the picture IMHO...
    Ditto! Took the words right out of my mouth. Really cool shot and the leading lines with the lit up rails is awesome. Oh, and ditch the top 1/5th of the image.
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    thanks for your comments...!

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    Very well captured K-max.
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    well made, I'll add my voice as well with regard to the leading lines
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