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About LinkBackswoops - don't know how I missed the "bright diagaonal line under the gear", must have been a longer day at work than I thought. I did however work on the "Skylark" part. Thanks Bambi for the subtle clue.
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woops - don't know how I missed the "bright diagaonal line under the gear", must have been a longer day at work than I thought. I did however work on the "Skylark" part. Thanks Bambi for the subtle clue.
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These kinds of shots are very personal in processing but this is actually only partially what i meant. Let me say this, the redo is also good and it makes it more concrete as to what this is...but it's much flatter/muddier/greyer than version one.
Basically i wanted you to leave the right side of the photo alone and only fill in/reduce the brightness issues on the left side and you've done a decent job with that. i really liked the higher contrast of version one except for the parts that were too blown out on the left side.
Hope that helps - Thx! marko
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Very much so, thanks again ( sorry for late reply, been out of town on a job and worked 50 hours in 4 days, then taught a full day of health and safety at the union hall today)
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