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Grace....up close

This is a discussion on Grace....up close within the Architecture & Man Made (cities, buildings, roads, objects & abstracts) forums, part of the Show your photo (Color) - Landscape & Nature (flowers, mountains, storms etc.) category; I appreciate any comments re: composition, clarity, etc etc. Thank you...

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    I appreciate any comments re: composition, clarity, etc etc.

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    I'd love to find an old sailing ship to shoot one day. We never see them here in my area.

    In the 1st shot you have a hugely crooked water horizon. That should be straight. Which I realize would then tilt the mast after you rotated. To solve that I guess you'd have to shoot a bit wider so the mast wasn't right near the frame.

    In the 2nd one I could only be picky as it's fine as is. I'd probably clone out that bit of land in the bottom left corner.

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    Beautiful boat! I love the second photo for sure!

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