When you said this was stronger I immediately thought "no way" and scrolled my widdle fingers back up to look at the first fence shot. Then I wasn't so sure.
Looking closer I reckon the best composition might be similar to your last effort that cuts out some of the dead grass (try removing some before shooting) BUT ... shows more of the trainyard to the right of frame.
I think that would satisfy JJ's comment (which I agree with) about the leading lines going somewhere.
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