Chasing the Bow

[JAS_Photo]

The Bow by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography, on Flickr

[Marko]

Interesting comp - my eye like the shapes. I think I might correct the lines on the Bow on the left side if this were mine.

[JAS_Photo]

Thanks, MarKo! It was kind of a one off while waiting for the light. Here is a bit of a re-edit. I did not want to lose too much of the photo. What do you think?



Chasing the bow edit-2 by Jacqueline A. Sheen Photography, on Flickr

[Hillbillygirl]

Interesting comp JAS, and my choice is first one.

[Lorey]

Cool! Great lines! I like it.

[asnow]

I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.

[Runmonty]

I think I prefer the original. The edge of the building on the left doesn't really bother me. The one thing that does is the bar from the traffic light.

I quite like the traffic light bar. It emphasises the angles and lines in an urban environment, and repeats the lines on the left face of the building.