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  1. 09-30-2013, 09:35 PM #1
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    Default Try Marco. Fly. Please help me comment.

    Name: 9989053214_aa67726247_b.jpg Views: 353 Size: 297.9 KB
    Name: 9989069074_26ae683ac7_b.jpg Views: 322 Size: 315.3 KB
    First time I am used macro len. Please help me comment my photo. I am learning more for shooting.
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  2. 10-01-2013, 02:12 AM #2
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    thank you for coming.
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    Very nice work. Well done
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    Two very nice images, the detail is fine and you've got focus on the eyes but I feel the composition could be stronger. The placement of the fly in the frame feels awkward to me.
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    Thank you for comments. I will try to next time.
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