Broken to pieces

[kat]

I know..more texture stuff.

This week I lost my grandfather the next day received news of another close friend in serious condition. It's been a hard week. This has to be the first photo that has emotion behind it.

The question is..did it work? Or does it look like me in mud..lol And be truthful people! LOL..I can handle it!

[Mad Aussie]

Sorry to hear you are having a tough week. After reading that, your hurt appears evident in your eyes.

The texture looks more like peeling than broken to me ... which is probably still approprate anyhow huh?

[kat]

Sorry to hear you are having a tough week. After reading that, your hurt appears evident in your eyes.

The texture looks more like peeling than broken to me ... which is probably still approprate anyhow huh?

Thanks. It does doesn't it.. hmmm..wish I could retitle it now!

[Marko]

as well Kat. Life is so hard sometimes. Being aware of it all is one of the curses of being human.

In terms of this image, first off i like it; it's strong for sure and I like the B/W.

I can see the emotion behind the paint. (I agree with MA - it looks like paint). That still works for me though. To improve the shot, I might have suggested a bit more expression/sadness from your face. I can feel the sadness from the words you've written, but I'm not seeing that same level of sadness from your face. If your face 'looked' sadder or more emotive the image would be considerably stronger imo. Trust me though, I know you 'are' very sad.

Hope that helps - and again I'm sorry for your loss and offer you my condolences.

Sincerely,

Marko

[kat]

Thank you. I don't find the death the hard part but the fact of finality and that it can come at any time to anyone..myself included.

I have to agree with the sadness. Hence why I asked. I don't think I'll be able to get that photo of myself. I find it to hard to get a good emotional shot when I have to shoot myself.

I would love to get more emotional shots, I find it hard to find someone who can model that way. Hoping that if we move to Vancouver..that I will find.

[Iguanasan]

to hear about your woes. I hope things get better for you soon!

With respect to the photo, I am missing some shadows around your nose in this image as I find your nose has "disappeared" on your face Otherwise, I think the result works.

[Barefoot]

Thanks. It does doesn't it.. hmmm..wish I could retitle it now!

There's so much sorrow in this world and your image depicts it in a masterful way. I wouldn't worry about the title as it really doesn't need one. It's meaning is clear to me.

[kat]

Thank you all for your kind words.

I really want to bring my photography to another level and be an inspiration..but that is sure a hard thing to do.

Maybe that can be a theme some time..strong emotional photos

I would be up for the challenge

[Bambi]

Kat, this is an incredible photo. Raiven described it the best for me so 'ditto'.

I am sorry to hear that you are having such an awful time of it.