Window Portrait

1/500 at f/2.0, ISO 100, 50 mm (Canon EF50mm f/1.4 lens). I liked the black and white version more.

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I dig the comp here - and I also like the interesting lighting as it sets a dramatic mood.
That said - I'm not convinced the lighting is flattering the model (especially in the BW version). IMO it's too dramatic
In addition - the armpit got the most light - so a good portion of our attention goes there.
Hope that may help