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    This is the Honors dorm at the University Of Central Arkansas college.

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    This works I think.

    I'd probably try some level/curves to add a bit of contrast to see if that improves it or not. It may not though.

    At first glance I thought what a boring angle, but then I saw the two paths leading in and realized it's actually a good composition.

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    I like it. The symmetry is cool.
    Is that lens flare in the top left or something moving during a long exposure?

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    I like the shot. But the sky is a bit too brown for my liking. You should try this shot a little earlier, when there's still some blue in the sky for a more natural "darkness" feel to it. Shooting in complete darkness usually gives 'brown' skies like this. Shooting just after sunset usually works best...
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