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Hello,
I've been working on touching up a shot I took in Panama, but to be honest I really have no idea what I'm doing and am basically fumbling in the dark trying to find what looks good. Here are the before and after shots of what I have come up with thus far. I'm especially not sure what to do with the person in the shot, if anything... he just seems to blend in to me... Any feedback suggestions would be extremely appreciated!
This is my take on it. I think if you ask 10 different people you are going to get 10 different answers ;)
Unless you really want that person in the photo then I would crop them out. Try to look for the "photo within the photo".
I cropped, straightened the tower and cloned out the antenna and boosted the shadows (all with Picasa). My result is here (I hope you don't mind, it's easier than explaining sometimes)
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Have you put the before and after shots? Or did you accidently put up two before shots? I can't see a difference.
ah! good catch lol. I had originally uploaded a large-ish file, spotted the file size limit post, and when I re-uploaded I must of put up two of the after shot... fixed now, original and processed are there.
Iguanasan, good idea... I'll mess around with cropping it.
Looks like you fixed before and after thing now ... it was abit dull looking to begin with I see.
In the meantime I decided to have a crack at what was there so I used the after version to create what's below. Hope you don't mind.
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u...ick-otighe.jpg
interesting... I took some inspiration from that and tried to make the grassy area and person have more of a 'glow' and seem a bit unreal, and I like the change. I also tried cropping... I like it, but not as much as the full shot, something about the wideness of the sky around the tower I like. Oh, and I don't mind any attempts at editing it you make, in fact I insist and appreciate the effort to help!
Current version before I hit the sack:
I really like Mad Aussie's idea and your interpretation but depending on your taste, you can go the opposite route and make everything supersharp and contrasty which gives the look of an illustration or photo realist painting.
Gotta work tonight so I'm out of time myself now but tomorrow I might have another crack with a different crop and technique and see what I can do.
Not bad Raiven ... not bad.
Very interesting.....at first glance I wasn't sure the shot was a keeper, but I like the various treatments the members suggested.
Personally, I think I'm with iggy on this one but I'd likely crop the left side to the tower as opposed to iggy's right crop. The main problem here for me is the tower structure, it's too central imo. The various treatments though, help the shot quite a bit. Hope that helps - Marko
Hmm. If Mick's main objective was to lose the lady with the camera - i don't think most of the edits make the cut.
Mick - you could go and do some cloning, but that would take some serious time to do it right. Cropping is a great idea. The crop for it though, IMO should be a slice out of the middle as a keeper turning the horizontal image into a vertical one...
I would also use the texture of the bricks as your main focus, not the color of the bricks. just my :twocents: worth.
