Secret Passage

Another one from Kingston - while walking around I noticed all these people ducking into an alley off of a main street. I followed them and found this neat little alleyway into a court yard.

http://vidi-images.weebly.com/upload...80311_orig.jpg

I love the texture in this one. Wonderful stuff.

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Originally Posted by okmqaz42

I love the texture in this one. Wonderful stuff.

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Thanks okmqaz42!

Interesting capture and the textures are very nice. I hope you don't mind me saying but I wish the wall wasn't quite so tilted though.

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Originally Posted by Iguanasan

Interesting capture and the textures are very nice. I hope you don't mind me saying but I wish the wall wasn't quite so tilted though.

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I don't mind...this is the Critique section after all!

Hi Greg_R,

There's something missing for me. For me it needs a subject as the walls are too overpowering. I would have gone complete b&w monochrome on this rather than sepia if I was just focussing on the architecture. Having said all that I do like the texture of the stones.

Regards,
NorthStone

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Originally Posted by NorthStone

Hi Greg_R,

There's something missing for me. For me it needs a subject as the walls are too overpowering. I would have gone complete b&w monochrome on this rather than sepia if I was just focussing on the architecture. Having said all that I do like the texture of the stones.

Regards,
NorthStone

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Thanks NorthStone. I appreciate your honesty and will try the b&w.

Cheers!

It has a decent overall graphic quality that I feel would be better expressed in pure BW - I agree with Greg R here.
This could also use some DB play (dodge/burn) to guide the viewer's eye a bit more.

I like it! Maybe just a wee bit too much light on the right wall ... yeah, give the dodge/burn thing a try

Thanks Marko & Matt!