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Michaelaw
06-11-2008, 03:44 PM
http://www.redzonefilms.com/pics/beesm.jpg

Olympus E-510
Zuiko 70-300mm

kiley9806
06-11-2008, 03:50 PM
wow! great capture! them bees are absurdly fast...
i'd like the shot to be a bit more bright, more colorful maybe on the purple & yellow. and if that one strip of grass was not in the background, it might look more clean. but im a newbie, so this is just as a viewers eye sees it, not really a 'photographer'. a very good insect shot imo!

tegan
06-11-2008, 04:09 PM
I agree with Kiley. A great shot. The colour problem she noticed is due to the browser not doing the conversion very well from the Adobe rgb colour format to the s rgb format for display on this site. When I did the conversion in a photo editor instead, the colour was excellent.

I also agree on a little clean up of distracting grass and whatever on the left hand side.

Tegan

Marko
06-12-2008, 07:27 AM
I like this shot as well and for me that blade of grass on the left is the main distraction. Aside from that, :highfive:

Best!
Marko

cdanddvdpublisher
06-12-2008, 11:06 PM
strange as it may seem, i kind of like the blade of grass; it creates a great triangle in the center of the shot. i'd be a little more concerned with the amount of digital noise in the background of the shot if it were mine, but still, a great capture.

Michaelaw
06-13-2008, 09:47 AM
Thanks everyone. I have built the image again from scratch to try and deal with the noise issue. I too like the grass so I left it alone.

cdanddvdpublisher
06-14-2008, 01:20 AM
Thanks everyone. I have built the image again from scratch to try and deal with the noise issue. I too like the grass so I left it alone.



glad to hear it ;)