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u666u
02-28-2010, 06:49 PM
Lets try this again.:evil2:
Bambi
02-28-2010, 07:07 PM
:clap:yay it worked!
Okay, I like the simpleness of this picture quite a bit. The tree in the right side helps set the perspective and sets a nice lonely mood. Including then fence is also a good compositional decision.
I think with a little more processing though, this photo could really sing (as Marko would say). A bit of brightening at the bottomw, some sharpening and a levels boost should really enhance this photo. I would also crop out the bottom snow bank and have teh photo start at the bottom of the fence.
just my :twocents:
casil403
02-28-2010, 07:51 PM
I'm with Bambi on this...and I'll add I might try to lean this into more of a landscape orientation than the orientation it is now. My eye is travelling across the fence, one side to the other looking at the trees in the background and the contrast in the sky so if it were me I would focus in that direction, I think the sun at the very top can go also.. :)
Again others may differ in their opinions. :thumbup:
Wicked Dark
02-28-2010, 07:57 PM
Nice idea, but it needs to be in focus. I can't find anything that is. Also needs a stop or two more exposure (the key to making snow white in photos). You have good instincts though, so keep working on it.
Mad Aussie
02-28-2010, 08:49 PM
Good critiques gang. I have nothing to add to that lot.
u666u
02-28-2010, 09:30 PM
I shot these for a class at ACAD so I have diff exposure can I post another expos=kkyure dd=one one this day? I'm a rooky.
Mad Aussie
02-28-2010, 09:33 PM
I shot these for a class at ACAD so I have diff exposure can I post another expos=kkyure dd=one one this day? I'm a rooky.
Not quite sure what you are asking here. Are you asking if you are allowed to post more than once in this thread? Or allowed to post more than one photo per day here? If so ... Yes and Yes.
JAS_Photo
02-28-2010, 09:41 PM
Pretty cool photo though. I like the minimalist idea. We drove out to Chestemere Lake in December and the coutryside looked like this. It was more than minus 30 that day so could not ask the driver to stop. :( I did take a couple from the car but the fence posts were blurred sadly.
Bambi
02-28-2010, 09:42 PM
I shot these for a class at ACAD so I have diff exposure can I post another expos=kkyure dd=one one this day? I'm a rooky.
ah are you a student at the Alberta College of Art and Design? Was this shot with flim or is it digital? I only ask because my daughter at NSCAD is in an intro photo class and she has to shoot with a film camera. Fortunately we had a Minolta 35 mm that is my husband's
and yes you can post as many pictures as you like. :)
u666u
02-28-2010, 10:25 PM
I took a night class at ACAD. Have take most of my classes at SAIT (night) but ran out of classes to take. I found this class made me think about what I am shooting. I really enjoyed it. Thankyou all for your input
u666u
02-28-2010, 11:51 PM
Nice idea, but it needs to be in focus. I can't find anything that is. Also needs a stop or two more exposure (the key to making snow white in photos). You have good instincts though, so keep working on it.
Not in focus is nasty!! The snow that the sun is on is white that is what I went for. I have other higher exposures they make the snow white. I am still learning but not a complete amature. O... sh.. I thank you but how do I show the light and the sun in the right light? This is hard.
Mad Aussie
03-01-2010, 12:09 AM
When you say 'higher exposures' do you mean longer exposures ... ie exposures (photos) that used a longer shutter speed? Or do you mean you have photos that you used a wider aperture setting (lower f-stop value) ? In other words, photos that are brighter all around?
What you are dealing with in a photo like this is a scene with such a large difference in the bright areas and darker areas that the camera can not correctly exposure for it in a single photo. This is called having a large or high dynamic range (HDR).
Your choices in this type of photo include these ...
a) expose for the brightest areas and try to silhouette the darker parts. This keeps detail in those bright clouds as much as possible,
b) try to go an average exposure which will do an average job meaning some parts will be exposed well, some parts won't. Most likely you will have blown out highlights and dark areas without detail,
c) use an HDR Merge process where you take around 3 to 5 photos using a tripod in rapid succession and then use software and processing skills to blend the photos together to produce a photo that retains better exposure throughout,
d) use a Graduated Neutral Density Filter on the lens that allows you to darken the light hitting the lens from the bright parts but still see the darker areas as normal. This allows the filter/lens combination to even up the HDR and take a single photo.
Note: In some cases a Circular Polarizer will do this job as well if the HDR isn't too great.
Marko
03-01-2010, 12:40 PM
A.L. gives good advice here.
....I have other higher exposures they make the snow white. I am still learning but not a complete amature. O... sh.. I thank you but how do I show the light and the sun in the right light? This is hard.Just wanted you to be aware of the difference between colour cast and correct exposure.
IF the snow is correctly exposed, it can STILL have a bluish or another coloured cast. That's because the light that lights the snow is blueish or another colour (golden/yellowy).
JUST LIKE a person being lit by light reflected off a RED wall will have a reddish cast to their face. The exposure can still of course be perfect....but you need to get rid of the red cast unless u are going for a special effect.
With snow...there is more leeway because even our eyes can sometimes see a bluish cast to the snow. So you can remove all the blue or keep a portion of the blue... it's really up to your creative expression in this case.
Just know that a bluish cast on snow might be acceptable but if there is a person in that shot, the cast may also be in their face and it may not look pleasing.
all this to say.....
worry about exposure first IMO.
Personally I rarely correct my colour casts in camera when i shoot outdoors. I correct them in post if I need to. With non-daylight I say I correct for colour (play with automatic white balance) only 10% of the time.
Hope that helps,
Marko
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