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Chantelle
12-23-2009, 11:45 PM
Here's my first story-board, this is Marlee absolutely buggered after his morning walk. What do you think? :confused:


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4029/4209619497_d59614ee50_o.jpg

AntZ
12-23-2009, 11:51 PM
Going...Going...Gone :) Cute sequence.
Not too much to Critique, maybe a shallower DOF to blur the background. I also find a border around each frame looks nice and helps separate the frames.

Bambi
12-24-2009, 09:40 AM
I love it!
He's a born model! :highfive:

Marko
12-24-2009, 12:19 PM
I really like this Chantelle!
Totally agree with Antz on the Bkgd, it's only slightly distracting though..... in this case I think a plain wall would have been best.
Hope that helps - Marko

Chantelle
12-24-2009, 03:41 PM
Thanks everyone. That's just where he ended up laying, so couldn't help the background unless I actually slide him across the floor to a different bg. :goodvibes

I debated with myself about the borders between the frames, I left it with no border because I often see these story-boards with no border.

kat
12-24-2009, 04:20 PM
Very nice! I love these kind of images and sets!