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dmagick
11-27-2009, 08:10 AM
Any suggestions? :)

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2646/4137142827_0ba2ac58cc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/dmagick/4137142827/)

Fortytwo
11-27-2009, 08:37 AM
Looks great! :) If anything, I'd fiddle with saturation a bit to get more color into the picture.

Bambi
11-27-2009, 10:05 AM
I think that you should go back and ask your model to do some different poses for you: face on, laying down, perhaps springing towards the camera.......:clown:

It's a neat capture. I do wish I could see more of the tiger though.

crystalb
11-27-2009, 11:03 AM
I agree with Fortytwo on this one, needs some color for it to pop.

Iguanasan
11-27-2009, 02:01 PM
I agree with both Forty-Two and Bambi. More saturation to make it pop a little more and a less tight crop.

Mad Aussie
11-27-2009, 05:14 PM
I'd sharpen that eye up a bit also and try to drop the highlights back a little. And I agree that more saturation on the tiger would help.
I'd then dodge in the darker areas of the nose, mouth and ear area to lighten them a tad.

I don't mind the crop ... would have been nicer with all the ear though.

Get that eye to stand out as I said and it will lift this a heap!

dmagick
11-27-2009, 05:32 PM
Thanks for the suggestions, I'll have a play with the colour. I can only make the crop tighter, that's 100% (taken with a canon 100mm macro and the tiger not far away from the glass window).

This is my other favourite from the day - any suggestions here?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/4137905644_af0178e34b.jpg

Mad Aussie
11-27-2009, 05:35 PM
Hey that second one is a beauty.
I'd be dodging up those eyes and cropping out that top bit of pavement. It also had a slight colour cast on it ... looks kind of greenish I think so maybe add a touch of red.

Bambi
11-27-2009, 06:53 PM
Hey that second one is a beauty.
I'd be dodging up those eyes and cropping out that top bit of pavement. It also had a slight colour cast on it ... looks kind of greenish I think so maybe add a touch of red.

all that and, what was it? :confused: oh yeah! RUN! :eek: she looks like she's coming after yo

Iguanasan
11-27-2009, 07:55 PM
Thanks for the suggestions, I'll have a play with the colour. I can only make the crop tighter, that's 100% (taken with a canon 100mm macro and the tiger not far away from the glass window).

This is my other favourite from the day - any suggestions here?

Ah, yeah. Frame it! :D Great capture.

Chantelle
11-27-2009, 10:34 PM
They are brilliant! love em, only critique I got, is the brightness on that second one, the tiger looks a bit shadowy. Great job!

dmagick
11-28-2009, 07:29 AM
Ah, yeah. Frame it! :D Great capture.

Thanks :D

dmagick
11-28-2009, 07:30 AM
Thanks again for all the comments/suggestions, much appreciated.