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JAS_Photo
08-23-2009, 02:55 AM
This is my original photo. I like the simple geometric shapes and the green trees reflected in the upper window of the alley view of this building.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2481/3847794386_219f2aafcf_o.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jas_photos/3847794386/)

But, I think maybe there is a stronger picture in there:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2601/3847908886_0e17a2e73a_o.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jas_photos/3847908886/)
nomad358
08-23-2009, 04:02 AM
The first one is awesome!
kat
08-23-2009, 09:00 AM
Love the first one..the second is fine as well but doesn't shine with the colors like the first!
MoinMoin
08-23-2009, 10:01 AM
I couldn't decide betwenn both. The first has the greater colour - the second shows the stair's pattern better.
Barefoot
08-23-2009, 10:37 AM
They're both nice images, but I prefer the colors in the second one and the way the diagonal of the stairwell leaves the frame in the top right corner. I'd like to see it shot at dusk or just as the light over the door is on with a slight underexposure.
kat
08-23-2009, 10:46 AM
They're both nice images, but I prefer the colors in the second one and the way the diagonal of the stairwell leaves the frame in the top right corner. I'd like to see it shot at dusk or just as the light over the door is on with a slight underexposure.

That is a great idea Barefoot!
tomorrowstreasures
08-24-2009, 09:29 AM
great input from all! me? i really like the top one as i love red!
Marko
08-24-2009, 09:54 AM
Good eye in seeing the lines and framing the shot!