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joaoandreqff
08-22-2009, 11:50 AM
http://fotos.sapo.pt/vZktf5a4k2aZ4GNCnlWs/

Do you think the fence is too distracting or it helps to lead the eye to the subject?

JAS_Photo
08-22-2009, 01:05 PM
As it is, to me, the architecture is the subject and the child and that little bench are distractions. For me, to change that around, I would crop the bottom of the photo right where the near fence support and the shadow of the fence intersect. The child then becomes your focal point in my opinion. :)

Greg_Nuspel
08-22-2009, 01:13 PM
As it is, to me, the architecture is the subject and the child and that little bench are distractions. For me, to change that around, I would crop the bottom of the photo right where the near fence support and the shadow of the fence intersect. The child then becomes your focal point in my opinion. :)

Good call, I agree with your assessment. That bench has to go.

tirediron
08-22-2009, 01:13 PM
There's some neat stuff here, but for me, as-is, the image doesn't work. I think Raiven's comments are right on. Additionally, the problem with the fence is that it's a perfect leading line to guide your eye, but to what? You need something at the end of it...

tomorrowstreasures
08-22-2009, 09:53 PM
There's some neat stuff here, but for me, as-is, the image doesn't work. I think Raiven's comments are right on. Additionally, the problem with the fence is that it's a perfect leading line to guide your eye, but to what? You need something at the end of it... too bad the child was not at the end of the fence!:)