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scorpio_e
07-15-2009, 06:00 PM
Recommendations welcome.

My first collage

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2535/3721804074_2afd86e556_o.jpg
Marko
07-16-2009, 01:36 AM
As a collage I'm not sure it's having enough impact, though I do like the shot at bottom right.
MoinMoin
07-16-2009, 04:04 AM
The shots for themselfs are good. Maybe you should put some space between the four pictures? And this one with the text should not be on the right side. Isn't it the left one the side leading your eyes into the picture?
scorpio_e
07-16-2009, 08:50 AM
All great comments !!
Thanks :)
Mad Aussie
07-19-2009, 03:11 AM
I think the shots themselves are very nice. The collage itself doesn't appeal though. There's really no creativity in that. Borders, tilting. sacrificial images underneath etc might all be worth exploring for this.