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jventer
07-05-2009, 03:01 PM
She was playing model for me for some shoots
http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/ww341/jventer/nadine2-1.jpg

http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/ww341/jventer/Nadine-1.jpg

nomad358
07-05-2009, 07:39 PM
The first one is great! Nice job! Just be careful not to cut off the feet.

JAS_Photo
07-05-2009, 08:17 PM
Very cool! The feet thing is something I have to be careful to avoid too.

MoinMoin
07-06-2009, 10:22 AM
The first shot is a cool one ;-). But on the second one she looks a bit sad. I smile would be nicer :-).

tirediron
07-06-2009, 10:37 AM
It may be just my monitor, but I'm not seeing any detail in the coat in #1. #2 is nicely done, aside from her already noted expression, but I would consider adding an extra speedlight to your lighting arrangment to produce some catchlights, since as-is, her eyes are rather flat and lifeless.

scorpio_e
07-06-2009, 02:24 PM
I love the first one. Nice job on the lighting and her pose:)

jventer
07-07-2009, 05:48 AM
Thanks :)