Light trail laptop

[Realist]

I took a few pictures today. One is my roof, I just snapped it out of my window. The other is a long exposure of my laptop while panning. The last one is a long exposure down a dark hallway. Long exposures are very pleasing to me because of the lighting. I think they turned out well. Critiques?

http://img27.picoodle.com/img/img27/5/11/10/f_1000554m_1bbb5fb.jpg

http://img36.picoodle.com/img/img36/5/11/10/f_1000526copym_6efc29b.jpg

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/5/11/10/f_1000574m_544ab93.jpg

[Marko]

Hmmm,

Tough one. The middle shot is the most interesting shot to me because of the repeating pattern.

The hallway is not a bad shot...but it's just a hallway right?

The panning shot is just way too abstarct for me without lots of colour or some other dynamic element.

Hope that wasn't too harsh.

Marko

[Realist]

Hmmm,

Tough one. The middle shot is the most interesting shot to me because of the repeating pattern.

The hallway is not a bad shot...but it's just a hallway right?

The panning shot is just way too abstarct for me without lots of colour or some other dynamic element.

Hope that wasn't too harsh.

Marko

Don't worry about being to harsh on me. That's the only way I'm going to learn what's good and what's boring. Critisism is always welcome. :)