Duet

[tomorrowstreasures]

An attempt at being artsy. Few can tell my intention with the image.... thought I would give all of you a crack at it. please answer: can you tell what it is? what would you do to improve the file? Thanks for feedback in advance!
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[Chantelle]

Looks like a piano off to the right hand side there. The image seems a bit dark on my screen, but the light coming through the window gives the impression it's supposed to be.

[joaoandreqff]

The composition is interesting. But it's a little too dark indeed.

[jventer]

I like this image again it reminds me of a church maybe a funeral due to the darkness and the gentleman in the suit.

[kat]

I'd need the image a bit bigger. It does look a tad bit dark. I like the composition..the use of the window! Reminds me of those Alred Hitchock (however it's spelt) movies..

[kat]

Is he holding something?

[tomorrowstreasures]

thanks for weighing in everyone!

This is my husband and son practicing a duet in an old historical church. Son is playing the old upright piano. You can see movement in his hands in the lower right hand corner. The intention was black silhouette. I think if I would add a little extra light around son's face that I would get closer to what i had envisioned. Hmmmm.

[kat]

I see it now! I thought he was holding something!!! I can see the face now! OMG..get another coffee in yah kat! Yay. If you could of had just a wee bit more light just shining on your sons face I think it would of sealed the deal!!! Although..loike i mentioned earlier..hard to see this imagine on my screen..it's very tiny!