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Crashcat
05-18-2009, 04:00 PM
I was playing around with off camera flash.
Let me know what you think. (I know should have not taken it with the hands over the Company Logo ;-)
Pocket Watch was a gift from my Grandparents for my 21st and the TAG was a gift from my wife for my 40th.

Greg_Nuspel
05-18-2009, 09:11 PM
Some of us would know if you said it's Timex time what you meant. Every commercial it was 1:50 or 10 to 2. Showing my age again :headslap:

Mad Aussie
05-19-2009, 02:36 AM
I think a darker background might have enhanced this more.

You've used some tungsten light I think from the left side and the off cam flash from the right?
Warm tungsten versus cold flash and then more warm colour in the background.
I think this has made the flash look out of place here.

I quite like the composition to a point but I think I'd have used the TAG to hide the lid of the pocket watch.
Also I see you've cropped this photo square. I think allowing some negative space in the left of frame might have worked better.