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jseltzer
05-07-2009, 09:36 PM
A shot from the other day. I'm calling this "Conformity." I can't decide if I like it it or not.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3636/3499725260_12d7841eb9_b.jpg

It's part of my ongoing "Impersonal Space" series

Thanks,
Jeff

http://www.jeffseltzerphotography.com/

AntZ
05-07-2009, 09:53 PM
I like it, but there are multiple non conformances which detract from it a little. There are some lockers without a padlock, and one with a crooked padlock. I would also think about a tighter crop on the left.:twocents:
There is also a crop that would leave only the crooked padlock, with all other padlocks in the vertical position.

kat
05-07-2009, 10:33 PM
I like it too but I also agree with Antz. My eye went straight to the crooked padlock before the opened door.

Alex Wilson
05-07-2009, 10:53 PM
Sorry, couldn't resist...

Straightened and perspective-corrected (still not perfect, but closer), and obviously with the bottom row cropped out.

jseltzer
05-07-2009, 11:37 PM
Thanks for the great feedback! Very much appreciated!!


And her's another from the series ("comformity 2). I think this one addresses some of the issues raised with the first one:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3301/3498907765_9932e2ace5_b.jpg

ridicwilco
05-07-2009, 11:54 PM
damn you for being an LA photographer with a 5d mark II!!!!!!!!!

:clown::):p:highfive: