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SlipJigPiper
04-22-2009, 11:54 AM
For those who aren't familiar, Cades Cove is in the Smoky Mts of Tennessee. I thought this slightly Gaussian shot evoked the sleepiness and peacefulness of the region. Its one of my earlier attempts at post-processing a digital image. Your thoughts on how I could improve on composition/saturation/etc would be welcomed.
tirediron
04-22-2009, 12:28 PM
Hmmm... first off, while I understand your intent with the gaussian blur, I don't like it in this application; I get the impression that the focus was missed.
I like the composition, but I think it might have been even stronger if you'd moved a little to camera left and created diagonal lines of headstones leading to the church. I'd also suggest a slight levels/curves tweak to brighten up the dark areas just a bit.
This image would also benefit form a slight perspective correction. Overall though, it's a nice image, but how the heck do you resolve "Cove" in the mountains????
tomorrowstreasures
04-22-2009, 03:17 PM
I agree with TI.
SlipJigPiper
04-26-2009, 08:22 PM
Good points! Thanks. I gotta keep thinking "composition" more than I have.
I'll look into some dodging of the darker areas and dropping the blur effect.
Iguanasan
04-26-2009, 09:15 PM
I agree with the other comments but I want to add that this is one of those shots when I think the rule of thirds would have helped a lot in the composition. The church should be at one of the intersections (upper left or upper right) and I would make the bottom third of the image the graveyard. Just my :twocents:
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