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JAS_Photo
04-11-2009, 12:47 AM
Peace Park Arch at Eau Claire Prommenade (http://www.waymarking.com/waymarks/WM4Z2V)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3606/3430817466_5b8236328b_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jas_photos/3430817466/)

AntZ
04-11-2009, 01:02 AM
Raiven, I love it!:highfive: I like the tones and the contrast.
Maybe less foreground and more sky? Maybe increase the vignetting in the bottom corners to even things up? But these are only things I might try and see if it looks better.

JAS_Photo
04-11-2009, 01:16 AM
I really wanted to try out having all that walkway in there due to the geometric design, the vignetting I can try to adjust. This is a popular walkway and part of the bicycle trails so the vignetting was in part to 'disappear' the people to some extent. LOl.

Mad Aussie
04-11-2009, 01:21 AM
It's a man made object ... I wouldn't be too worried about people in the shot personally.

It's a bit centred at first glance, but the angle of the trees and the leading lines of the pavement seem to make the composition work I think.

The colours/tones and vignetting doesn't do anything for me I'm afraid. But that's just me. I tend to be drawn to colour most often.

tirediron
04-11-2009, 02:12 AM
I like the image, but I'd really like to see the lamp standard image right disapear.

EJC
04-11-2009, 09:27 AM
Well done Raiven! I agree with Tirediron and would also remove the debris from the sidewalk on 2 corners of the big square to the left and the bit at the bottom left.

Marko
04-11-2009, 10:56 AM
This is great play raiven - I like.
To improve the shot I find the archway too centered as MA suggested and the debris at left is a bit of a distraction as EJC suggested.
Sooooooo....I might crop hard on the left side to see if it helps.

MoinMoin
04-11-2009, 12:24 PM
I like it - the colours makes it more dramatically. And even the arc is centered - the vignetting is making it better.

casil403
04-11-2009, 03:33 PM
Love the colours and the contrasts Raiven...very nice!
To me it all just "pops" and works together nicely!

Iguanasan
04-13-2009, 09:38 AM
A late comment but Wow! Love this one. The tones are wonderful.

Gem
04-14-2009, 03:40 AM
Seems like everyone's pretty much said everything, so I'll just say: Great shot! :goodvibes:

JAS_Photo
04-14-2009, 03:52 AM
Thanks all! :)