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Marko
07-04-2019, 12:45 PM
Feel free to comment on any aspect - thx!

asnow
07-10-2019, 04:41 PM
I like the colours and that is a very interesting window. A couple of 'small' things I think might improve it.
1. The edge of the building on the left bothers me a little bit. Maybe a couple of steps to the right might have helped.
2. I'm not completely sold on the person in front of the window. I think that I would have preferred her in front of the building part. Mind you she would have been in front of the bicycles.
3. Did you happen try one cropping above the benches and at the left edge of the building. Of course this would mean no person would be in the pictures.

I hope these comments help.

Runmonty
07-11-2019, 04:07 AM
I would have loved to have founds this when I was doing my windows project.

I am with asnow finding the left a little distracting, but I do like the inclusion of the walking person. Good timing with that too