Another set from my "Professional" Portrait Shoot - PLEASE C&C

[theantiquetiger]

These are a little better than my first ones I posted (IMO), my brother and niece

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3818/9154989589_8ae52dfe12_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/9154989589/)
todd2a (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/9154989589/) by Theantiquetiger (http://www.flickr.com/people/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7376/9154990639_88ec4dcdf4_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/9154990639/)
todd1a (http://www.flickr.com/photos/theantiquetiger/9154990639/) by Theantiquetiger (http://www.flickr.com/people/theantiquetiger/), on Flickr

[Andrew]

2 is fantastic. I think 1 is a bit to far off to the side. If it's cropped, pull out until there is an equal gap between the sides and body contact and see what it looks like.

[JAS_Photo]

Colour, poses, light, it's all looking good. Well done! By the way, how do you two guys get so lucky as to be surrounded with such beautiful girls? :)

[Marko]

I like shot 2 here.

Shot 1 has that over processed look...that imo draws attention to itself.

[Iguanasan]

I agree with Marko. Think of the Dove commercials when you are processing and let the natural beauty show through. She's a cutie and looks awesome in shot two as she's very relaxed and comfortable but shot one makes her look a bit plastic as she's in an uncomfortable pose and a little over processed.