silk scarf

[kiley9806]

would like to hear some feedback on this shot... thanks :)

[jjeling]

Awesome shot. I really like the lighting in this. There is one critique I would have. In the upper left corner of the shot, you can see the corner of the room. I would definitly crop that out. Maybe even crop the upper third of the image. Maybe rework the eye a bit(This is something I will always do after a recent podcast from marko ;-) After that, this image should be an award winner. Nice work. Would love to see more from this shoot.

[kat]

I don't mind the shot.

I would crop the photo a bit. I find that there is too much "nothing" space. But that is just preference. I do have a little problem with her left eye..guess the right eye on my screen. I wish I could see a bit more of it. Maybe her head tilled a bit more towards the light.

I'd like to see more shots too!

[scorpio_e]

I do like the concept.

I think there is too much nothing space. I would do a much tighter drop. It also look a little oof. The lighting is a little to contrasty. Would love to see more of the project:)

[kiley9806]

great thoughts all - thanks for the feedback. too funny that i totally didnt see that corner of ceiling... im usually pretty crazy when it comes to cropping out little things like that - thanks for the 2nd set of eyes... :) the lighting is all natural from a window... ive reworked the cropping & played with the eye a bit more here...

[jjeling]

much better, but i still think i would crop some more off the top.

[scorpio_e]

The crop is better. I would still remove from the top and I would also try cropping a little left too.

[kiley9806]

thanks guys - im going to leave the crop as is though, because when i was playing with it, if i took any more off, i would lose that halo/shadowed part that i like... but thanks for the feedback!