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[fsendel]

1529015291Hi! Kind of following up on a previous post (http://www.photography.ca/Forums/f7/how-were-these-achieved-17685.html) I'm attaching three shots for your valuable feedback.

[fsendel]

No comments?

:(

[Marko]

slow day i guess!
I quite like the composition on the last image. The right crop could go in a tad I feel. The bird adds a lot! I also like the BW of that image.
I also like the 'silvery' quality of the first image. The crop I find is too tight on image 1 - the eyes could also be a wee bit sharper though it is a cute shot.
Image 2 is not doing much for me I'm afraid even though she has a great face.
For me, you went in too tight and cropped too tight, especially on the bottom. Her expression is also very flat. I think for that image i would have like to have seen a bit more of the environment.

Hope that helps - marko

[fsendel]

Sure helps Marko, thank you. In the second shot I could not quite put my finger on what it was that I did not like, but you are right. I thought it was good because of the face but you make great points.

I'll try your suggested crop on the one with the bird.

[Marko]

My pleasure. For you or anyone reading this, sometimes I just get busy and miss threads and occasionally there are no comments.
If at anytime I miss a thread and you'd like me to take a look for any reason - please feel 100% to pm me. Or 'bump' the post and I'll make an even stronger effort to look and comment.
Thx!

[AntZ]

I pretty much agree with Marko. Even though the crop in shot 1 is a little tight(at the bottom) I like it very much, so it it more a comment on how it could have been better.
Shot 2 is looks like the focus might be slightly more on the forehead than the eyes and the DOF either too shallow or too much.
I like the shot 3 for the bird and the comp except for the little extra bit of the building on the right, which could have been more or cropped off.
I like the B&W in all 3 images.

[edG]

Marko and AntZ have covered the issues of the cropping, and composition - I would only add the #1 might be slightly over exposed, #2 is underexposed and #3 is just about dead on (on my monitor).