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Greg_R
09-10-2011, 09:03 PM
Another one from Kingston - while walking around I noticed all these people ducking into an alley off of a main street. I followed them and found this neat little alleyway into a court yard.

http://vidi-images.weebly.com/uploads/6/5/9/7/6597693/780311_orig.jpg
okmqaz42
09-11-2011, 01:30 AM
I love the texture in this one. Wonderful stuff.
Greg_R
09-11-2011, 07:16 AM
I love the texture in this one. Wonderful stuff.

Thanks okmqaz42!
Iguanasan
09-12-2011, 01:51 PM
Interesting capture and the textures are very nice. I hope you don't mind me saying but I wish the wall wasn't quite so tilted though.
Greg_R
09-12-2011, 02:35 PM
Interesting capture and the textures are very nice. I hope you don't mind me saying but I wish the wall wasn't quite so tilted though.

I don't mind...this is the Critique section after all!
NorthStone
09-12-2011, 03:46 PM
Hi Greg_R,

There's something missing for me. For me it needs a subject as the walls are too overpowering. I would have gone complete b&w monochrome on this rather than sepia if I was just focussing on the architecture. Having said all that I do like the texture of the stones.

Regards,
NorthStone
Greg_R
09-12-2011, 03:50 PM
Hi Greg_R,

There's something missing for me. For me it needs a subject as the walls are too overpowering. I would have gone complete b&w monochrome on this rather than sepia if I was just focussing on the architecture. Having said all that I do like the texture of the stones.

Regards,
NorthStone

Thanks NorthStone. I appreciate your honesty and will try the b&w.

Cheers!
Marko
09-12-2011, 04:22 PM
It has a decent overall graphic quality that I feel would be better expressed in pure BW - I agree with Greg R here.
This could also use some DB play (dodge/burn) to guide the viewer's eye a bit more.
Matt K.
09-12-2011, 08:18 PM
I like it! Maybe just a wee bit too much light on the right wall ... yeah, give the dodge/burn thing a try
Greg_R
09-12-2011, 08:22 PM
Thanks Marko & Matt!