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jhuang999
07-12-2011, 12:36 AM
Thought that this would be interesting attempt at contrast, perspective, and framing.
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Mad Aussie
07-12-2011, 02:52 AM
Looks very good on all accounts I'd say! I like the Empire State Building (?) nicely framed under the arch there.
casil403
07-12-2011, 08:55 AM
Very well done. I too like the Empire state nicely framed here.
Very neat shot. Lots to look at, framed nicely!
Marko
07-12-2011, 01:38 PM
I really like the framing here as well! Let me know if you'd like me to add some additional comments.
jhuang999
07-12-2011, 02:31 PM
Thanks for the responses everyone. Yes Marko, if you have more specific comments or possible improvements you are welcome to share. I would like to make a large print of this one.
Marko
07-12-2011, 02:55 PM
Ok then - in that case I might play with (dodging) bringing out a bit more shadow tones in the darkest black areas perhaps 10-15% (if possible) on the left side of the image. I might do the same on the right side by about 5-10% or more in the deepest blacks. For me, the street areas appear just a bit too dark, I think the image might benefit if there were a hint more street detail.
I might also crop the top by about 1/2 inch as that might accentuate the sloped 'ornaments' at the very top of the bridge. Hope that might help and it's just an opinion - Marko
very good composition and tones
Iguanasan
07-12-2011, 07:48 PM
Loving the comp on this one. Framing the bridge tower with the buildings and then the building with the bridge tower. Excellent!
aubintbay
07-12-2011, 08:08 PM
Nice shot all around!
JAS_Photo
07-13-2011, 12:53 AM
First off I have to say, damn you! You get to photograph that beautiful bridge and piece of architecture. I am so jealous I could spit. :) Secondly, wonderful framing! The bridge is gorgeous. I was looking at this last night and was thinking about the same thing as Marko about the dodging but was not sure whether I should say anything so just left it for the time being. Nicely done.
Hillbillygirl
07-17-2011, 06:37 AM
Well, to me, you seem to have aced on all three of what you were trying to achieve here. Have to say, the framing aspect is perfect. Very well done.
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