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taffy
05-26-2011, 06:16 PM
Clevedon Pier at high tide.

Comments welcome.

Taffy:)

Mad Aussie
05-27-2011, 01:52 AM
Lovely shot. Really like the pastel colouring, and the jet-stream following the line of the pier!

There's a small distraction at the bottom of shot ... a vertical white thing that I'd clone out or remove somehow.

edG
05-27-2011, 06:31 AM
well done and well made.

ditto on the white stick/stem

Iguanasan
05-27-2011, 07:30 AM
And, really, from a technical standpoint that's about all there is to worry about. Another option might be to clone out the ship. Since it's a minimalist type image of the pier then I think the pier should be the only thing in the shot. Other than those nit picky things this is an excellent image.

taffy
05-27-2011, 07:55 AM
:)Thanks for the kind comments.

Iggy - if the ship had been in the B&W I posted I probably would have taken it out, but in this one it feels ok

Cheers
Taffy:)

Iguanasan
05-27-2011, 08:23 AM
:)Thanks for the kind comments.

Iggy - if the ship had been in the B&W I posted I probably would have taken it out, but in this one it feels ok

Cheers
Taffy:)

Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying it HAS to come out. But you posted an otherwise excellent image for critique so I felt I had to say something about it and if there was anything at all that I would change it would be that. (and that white bit on the bottom).

AcadieLibre
05-27-2011, 09:54 AM
I like this photo it just seems to work all around not much I think I would do differently.

asnow
05-27-2011, 06:21 PM
Love the colours

ArtphotoasiA
05-29-2011, 08:17 AM
I would clone out the ship, is distracting.... the pastel color is just great ...

Keep doing...

johnbriner
05-30-2011, 03:54 PM
This is WOW! I love the shot! Beautiful scene! I love the color, very pastel, and the effect of the water waves, plus the effect of the line by the jet, very good to look at! Keep on posting!

Marko
05-30-2011, 04:26 PM
I might clone out the blade of grass/weed as MA mentioned - aside from that; love the image!

taffy
06-07-2011, 08:11 AM
Thanks for all the kind comments. The white distrcation at the bottom of the frame has now gone!

taffy:)