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Iguanasan
03-16-2011, 11:16 PM
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QuietOne
03-17-2011, 01:12 AM
I like the way the lamps line up and march down the side of the boardwalk on this.
Bambi
03-17-2011, 07:33 AM
black and white is an excellent choice for this.
Iguanasan
03-17-2011, 07:44 AM
Thank you, Quiet One and Bambi! Cheers :)
Marko
03-17-2011, 09:45 AM
I quite like this, good repeating pattern. Not much going on in the water though, I might have cropped this much closer to the first pole because of that fact. Just a thought.
Iguanasan
03-17-2011, 12:24 PM
Thanks, Marko. Trying to understand when negative space is an asset and when it's a distraction is not a trivial task ;)
Marko
03-17-2011, 02:46 PM
Thanks, Marko. Trying to understand when negative space is an asset and when it's a distraction is not a trivial task ;)
I gotta tell you I think that idea would make for an excellent podcast! I'm not sure I even know the answer...hmmm
Iguanasan
03-17-2011, 03:54 PM
I gotta tell you I think that idea would make for an excellent podcast! I'm not sure I even know the answer...hmmm
Well I can tell you that with this particular image the crop you suggest could totally work, however, I think it would give a different mood to the shot as it would get rid of a lot of the light and I feel would throw the shot out of balance for my taste. Challenge! ;)
asnow
03-17-2011, 05:44 PM
I like how the lamp posts provide a leading line down the boardwalk. The other reason, I think, you might want to crop on the left is that it seems a bit washed out on the left hand side. You would have to try it to see. As you said it might change the mood.
Bambi
03-17-2011, 06:19 PM
just to wade in with my completely inexpert opinion.... I like the water here. It add a neat light/dark ying/yang quality to it.:twocents:
Iguanasan
03-17-2011, 09:20 PM
For your consideration:
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QuietOne
03-17-2011, 10:39 PM
The mood's completely different. The first shot made me want to follow the line and see what's at the far end. This one seems - mundane. Maybe if I were in a different mood, or I hadn't seen the other I'd feel differently about it, but for me, I like the first one better.
mbrager
03-17-2011, 11:39 PM
For me it's a brilliant photograph because of the openness on the left, the water just opens up the whole space so I feel what it's like standing on the boardwalk and the sea air. There's a sense of fog over the water. Second crop shuts all that down. I like that it's sharp all the way to the Murphy's sign and each board is visible on the walkway. Plus, there are no people around to distract, which brings a mood of early morning. Very nicely done black and white conversion.
AcadieLibre
03-18-2011, 12:57 AM
I like the picture a lot, I would only like a bit more definition in the clouds, not a lot just a tad more I think it would make it a bit more dramatic. Outsie that I would leave it as it is, nicely done.
Bambi
03-18-2011, 09:16 AM
the new crop does not work for me. :)
Marko
03-18-2011, 09:27 AM
Interesting how different crop please different people.
I agree that the whole mood changes w/this crop, but for me, this new crop makes the image considerably stronger. I'd still burn the mid left edge by 5-10% here.
I think if the lights turn on this would also make a nice evening shot.
Mad Aussie
03-18-2011, 05:16 PM
Almost a backlit feel to this one. Nice.
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