Critique another one, please

[Oleg]

http://i560.photobucket.com/albums/ss45/shift2_bucket/esprit.jpg

[Mad Aussie]

I think it looks fine. A little soft around the text perhaps.
Possibly could have that ribbon in a nicer arrangement rather than dominantly leaving the photo at right of frame.

[Oleg]

Thanks..

[Marko]

I agree with MA here - The Trident text on the spool facing us should be tack sharp and it's a bit soft.