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ShaunS
10-29-2010, 10:59 PM
Hi,
Just found this forum after listening to the podcast. Though I would start submitting some of my shot for critique as I would like to improve my skills.
This shot of the dragonfly was taken over 2 years ago but I though it might be a good one to start with.
I would personally take the white glow in the background out. I find it distracting. Love the subdued tones of the dragon fly and what it's on. And that is what I see top of my head that I would personally change.
ShaunS
10-30-2010, 06:21 PM
Thanks for the feedback kat, I always liked this shot but knew it just wasn't quite right and the reflection is detracting from the subject.
Iguanasan
10-31-2010, 11:52 AM
Lots of fine detail in a very good macro shot. Like the catchlights in his eyes. The big white spot absolutely has to go though. The other thing is that it's a little too centered. Hope this helps.
ShaunS
11-02-2010, 05:48 AM
Thanks for the feedback, I have other shots without the reflection but the DOF isn't quite right and alot of the detail is fuzzy.
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