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mcopan
10-25-2010, 11:25 PM
Here is a shot that I really like and would like some helpful constructive comments about if necessary.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1241/5116119333_330053fea7.jpg

Shant M
10-26-2010, 01:30 AM
I like it alot,

However I personally feel the reflections in the speedometer glass blend in with the gray of the rest of the photo and distract a bit. The black dial being the main focus of the composition, I would have probably done it using a CP to remove the reflections of the clouds and give a nice contrasting black dial to attract the eye.

Marko
10-26-2010, 10:28 AM
For me the main problem here is that the focal point is not tack sharp...which again, for me means i stop working on it and move on.
The tones look decent but could use a bit more contrast (maybe 15-20%) for extra pop.
The metal part at mid left is a distraction for me because it's so shiny and bright, I'd likely tone it down.
Hope that helps - Marko

mcopan
10-27-2010, 08:48 PM
Great help thanks:)

jumpinjimmyjava
11-12-2010, 09:04 PM
Cool capture mcopan. But speed kills ! - jimmy