Safe passage

[jumpinjimmyjava]

With a hint of sunlight and a new title. What version is best ?

“Twenty years from now, you will be more disappointed by the things you didn’t do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” Mark Twain (1835 – 1910)

[edG]

The other version for me thanks JJJ

[jumpinjimmyjava]

Hey thanks ed. But sadly I can not agree. I like this brighter more sunny version myself ! - jimmy

[Matt K.]

This one has more impact. Well done.

[jumpinjimmyjava]

Thanks Matt. I agree this one has more pop ! - jimmy

[QuietOne]

How about saying each represents a part of Twain's warning? The tones of the other seem sadder. It's the regrets for the things you didn't do. This one is a trunk that's well used. Obviously, you have been doing things.