Tenby at Dusk

[taffy]

This Tenby Harbour in West Wales taken late evening.

Comments welcome.

Taffy:)

[Mad Aussie]

Quite nice Taffy. I'll have to be picky to critique this one.

Aspect ratio suggests a cropped sky again ... I'd have liked to see that left in and give those buildings a bit more room to breathe.
Lights on, suggesting dusk or early evening but few shadows to help illustrate that. A little on the foreground rock but not really enough I think.
I think for me, I'd like to see this scene a little darker overall to give that sky a more night feel and make the lights and buildings stand out more in contrast.

Nice use of the rock as foreground interest and overall a pleasant scene.

[Bambi]

I agree with MA (of course why would I argue?;) ). I quite like that rock in the middle- it looks like a crocodile.The colours of the houses are neat as well.

I would love to see some closer shots of the boats too.

[taffy]

Taken on board the comments and ended up with this one.

Not sure if this meets the spec?

Feedback welcome

Taffy:)

[Mad Aussie]

NOW it looks like a real early evening shot to me. In my opinion .... much better!

[Fusion]

Would agree the re-work of the second image brings more of the ''feel'' of the time of day. The crop is a little tight for me especially at the top but it's still a keeper...:thumbup::thumbup:

[scotpet11]

I find this a bit busy, many things distract from the subject of the image, which I have yet to figure out.
I tend to follow by a rule - Simplicity is best.
But keep in mind rules are ment to be broken ^_-